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This is the last page of this scene. The ending is a bit abrupt, but not a lot else can be done with an unconscious Gwen. Anything more to be done will have to be addressed in the morning when the next part begins.

Side note, I’ve been working on this comic for years now without missing a week (minus one week I had to take off due to a death in the family). As such I may take a week or two off from it before moving on to the next part. If I do decide to do this I’ll likely just do simpler things for a couple weeks, partly to let my hand rest a little, partly to afford time to look over and flesh out the details of the next part, and partly so that it feels a little fresh again when I get back to it. I’m not fully set on this, but it’s something I’m considering, so we’ll see how I feel about it as the weekend passes.

I was going to do this as two pages, but then I felt that unnecessary and tried compiling it down to this. I’m still not sure how I feel about it, so I may interject a page next time if I feel it appropriate, but for now I remain uncertain.

I promise this scene is nearing its end. There’s just one point about Ben that has to be emphasized her for relevance to the next scene. There’s going to be more anal throughout the night, but I am soon going to simply skim through it like I did with the rest of their day after the blowjob part, so there’s not much left.

Also, there’s more fluids and such to be added to the sleeping bag, I just felt it fine to add that in the colors as opposed to bothering to line it.

The bottom panel is intended to appear to be bubbling up from fluids projecting into fluids, which hopefully I can capture well in the colors. Also, lots of effect lines again, but as usual they’ll hopefully be less prominent in the colors.

Still not sure on Ben’s line in this one. I was contemplating “all in” or “all out”, but then I figured he’d try to be clever and mix both for the double meaning. Also, yes, this page is a call-back to what was shown in the anal video Gwen showed Ben before.