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With this page this scene is technically complete. At most there will be 1-2 more pages after this that just serve to transition into the next scene/location for this part.

I made some changes to the previous page (page 82). I failed and made the text gradient upside down, as well as missed a few other details, but I fixed what I immediately noticed and have reuploaded the file.

I actually had the colors for this finished this morning, but the dialogue gave me a ridiculous amount of trouble. I didn’t like how it was before because my intent was less to have Ben appear like he was being snappy and more like he was really enjoying the situation. No matter how I worded it out, however, it just didn’t sound acceptable to me, so it took a million retries.

Also, I mentioned in the lines that there was something I was going to try in the colors. That something was the X-ray in the bottom-left panel, and I feel it turned out okay enough to keep.

Lastly, some of you may have noticed that I activated Disqus reactions in a hope to create a like/dislike system, but it didn’t work as the reactions seemed to be accruing collectively instead of staying independent to the discussions they were in. Since this was noticed I have disabled the feature.

Up next is Ben’s turn to finish, then I can wrap this part up and be ready to move on to the next.

Sorry for the super late update on this one. This page had a lot of little details to color so the flats alone took a while. All of this on top of being behind already and then having to take care of another appointment today made this quite late to be posted.