I made some changes to the previous page (page 82). I failed and made the text gradient upside down, as well as missed a few other details, but I fixed what I immediately noticed and have reuploaded the file.
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Sultry Summer Page 83 Lines
16 August, 2018
Sultry Summer Page 83 Sketch
15 August, 2018
Sultry Summer Page 82
10 August, 2018
I actually had the colors for this finished this morning, but the dialogue gave me a ridiculous amount of trouble. I didn’t like how it was before because my intent was less to have Ben appear like he was being snappy and more like he was really enjoying the situation. No matter how I worded it out, however, it just didn’t sound acceptable to me, so it took a million retries.
Also, I mentioned in the lines that there was something I was going to try in the colors. That something was the X-ray in the bottom-left panel, and I feel it turned out okay enough to keep.
Lastly, some of you may have noticed that I activated Disqus reactions in a hope to create a like/dislike system, but it didn’t work as the reactions seemed to be accruing collectively instead of staying independent to the discussions they were in. Since this was noticed I have disabled the feature.
Sultry Summer Page 82 Lines
9 August, 2018
There’s still some things I’m considering different for the colors in the last 2 panels but it simply looks weird in line form so I didn’t want to put it down in the lines or sketch just in case it still looks silly in color. I’m also still a bit uncertain on the dialogue, but it’s too late now and I need to try and fix my sleep schedule at least a little bit before Friday.
Sultry Summer Page 82 Sketch
8 August, 2018
I was very unsure as to what to do with this page and thus got a super late start on the actual clean sketching process. A part of me is wanting to rush this part to the finish since it’s so close already, but at the same time I don’t want to cram too much into one page, so it was hard plotting exactly how much I wanted to put into this page.
I was also unsure of the mannerisms to put in this page for Ben, so the dialogue took some time to decide on. Still not sure if I’m satisfied on that front so it may change for the lines/colors, but I did decide it appropriate for Ben to continue looking at the situation increasingly playfully/casually.
Sultry Summer Page 81
3 August, 2018
Up next is Ben’s turn to finish, then I can wrap this part up and be ready to move on to the next.
Sultry Summer Page 81 Lines
2 August, 2018
Sultry Summer Page 81 Sketch
31 July, 2018
I was super late in uploaded my BF page for this week, but luckily this was a rather simple page to get caught back up with. Up next is Ben’s turn to finish then I can finally start on wrapping this part up and moving on to the next.
Sultry Summer Page 80
27 July, 2018
